We have been learning to create a Story Web.
Title: Astropup and the big match in the sky.
Author: Bertie.
Produced and proofread by: Jana Elizabeth.
Setting: soccer pitch in outer space.
Read by: Richard.
Characters: astropup, marlo, parrot, Wesley and robo cops.
beginning: Astropup is in space flying but he sees some space cats and space dogs (even though he is a dog).
Middle: he goes to the space soccer where all the cats and dogs go.
End: they get out of the place because everyone was fighting then before they got out they saw a dog on two legs.
Rating: 8/10
created by Luka and Ben.
hay ben its adam your story web is good and astro pup is funny
ReplyDeletethanks Adamske
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